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What A Maddening World
This world is a maddening place
we all have to our senses trace
No one knows
whats in another s mind
that does always surface
Yes this world is the only place
where one can heaven and earth trace
there is no heaven at any other place
nor you can your belief replace
Believe me come face to face
Your eyes can my eyes then deeply trace
else forsake friendships
for your own sake
my life is not at stake
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
ROSYME
Thu, 2021-06-10 13:56
well it worked
as Rosy me lol
lovedly
Sun, 2021-06-13 12:01
cansome one please read this and comment
just testing my old self
lovedly
Gee
Stan