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What I love about Her

Submitted by Hannah Moonlark on Sat, 2020-02-01 15:24

What I love about Her
I love
How random she is
How she’s unique
I love how she wears eyeliner on her face and
Nothing else
I love her ease with kids
I love how her voice sounds
And what she says
I love how she films her whole face and isn’t scared to post it
I really like her
I want to love her

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Comments

c lynn brooks

Sun, 2020-02-02 17:53

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You have the basics here for a good oem.. Instead of "I Love how she etc etc etc"
write your thoughts in a more poetic light
example

I love how unique she is
her voice

her ease with a child
etc then continue your thoughts

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