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What Buddha Says

Mind is everything
What you think you can become
Why am I still poor

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Structured: Eastern
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line one is 6 beats
line 2 is 6 beats
a haiku is 5/7/5 pattern

Chrys

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Hello thanks for your comment, I have updated
Hope its now correct number of syllables

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that you have gotten it right this time. Nice. ~ Geezer.
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Hello!
Enjoyed your Haiku very much!
Thank you!
Lavender

Glad you enjoyed it ! Many thanks

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so you may join
stan's titles workshop

perhaps
'Buddha said so'' OR
ENLIGHTEMENT OF BUDDHA
will be more apt
welcome
new poet of UK

hello from UK thanks for letting me join workshop titles
Sen

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