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What Buddha Says
Mind is everything
What you think you can become
Why am I still poor
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
How does this theme appeal to you?
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Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
c lynn brooks
Fri, 2020-05-29 15:11
haiku
line one is 6 beats
line 2 is 6 beats
a haiku is 5/7/5 pattern
Chrys
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Sen99
Sat, 2020-05-30 03:46
Edit
Hello thanks for your comment, I have updated
Hope its now correct number of syllables
Geezer
Sat, 2020-05-30 06:13
I see...
that you have gotten it right this time. Nice. ~ Geezer.
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Lavender
Sat, 2020-05-30 18:39
Buddha
Hello!
Enjoyed your Haiku very much!
Thank you!
Lavender
Sen99
Sun, 2020-05-31 04:50
Buddha
Glad you enjoyed it ! Many thanks
lovedly
Sun, 2020-05-31 10:22
Buddha is no more
so you may join
stan's titles workshop
perhaps
'Buddha said so'' OR
ENLIGHTEMENT OF BUDDHA
will be more apt
welcome
new poet of UK
Sen99
Sun, 2020-05-31 12:51
end of Buddha
hello from UK thanks for letting me join workshop titles
Sen