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Werewolf bite

werewolf bite

Oh, this story it is written
by a man who was bitten
by a werewolf in the night
in the forest under moonlight
it was creepy, it was dark
this bite was curse, a deathly mark
from that time and till now
man turns wolf as big as cow.

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Tried to make a funny one about supernatural creature
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Not Explicit Content

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Well done! A short, Halloween-like tale. Excellent use of rhyme! I wouldn't change a thing.

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~RoseBlack~

Thank you!

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could be taken as a funny poem about a man who becomes a big as a cow werewolf! Must be he has eaten too many people in the forest! Damn this camping season, has been a good one! Hee, hee. ~ Geezer.
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Thank you,Mark!

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