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Welcome to TV series
Take a ride to a little town
See, in the sky is flying crow
Beacon Hills or Mystic Falls
Bloody-bats or wolfy-dogs
Two cool brothers in the car
Caring salt through 'merica
Monsters, ghosts or any others
Vampires-sisters, werewolves-brothers
Sticks, and stones, and guns, and magic
With some funny moments, tragic
Love and hate and need of choice
Welcome in dear girls and boys
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Review Request (Direction):
How does this theme appeal to you?
Last few words:
TV series - something that helps to escape in a better place and live a thousand different lives. If not reading a book than watching films and TV series.
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Candlewitch
Sun, 2022-07-31 12:52
escape is good...
any old port in a storm *sighs, Cat
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Ray Whitaker
Fri, 2022-08-05 13:20
interesting poem
i am curious about a couple of things
"See, in the sky is flying crow" >> adding an "a" perhaps? [a flying crow]
"Caring salt through 'merica" >>did you mean Carrying?
"Love and hate and need of choice". >> [in need] instead of "and need"
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Anna Severchuk
Tue, 2022-08-30 17:22
Thank you for corrections!
Thank you for corrections!