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Welcome to TV series

Take a ride to a little town
See, in the sky is flying crow
Beacon Hills or Mystic Falls
Bloody-bats or wolfy-dogs
Two cool brothers in the car
Caring salt through 'merica
Monsters, ghosts or any others
Vampires-sisters, werewolves-brothers
Sticks, and stones, and guns, and magic
With some funny moments, tragic
Love and hate and need of choice
Welcome in dear girls and boys

Review Request (Intensity): 
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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How does this theme appeal to you?
Last few words: 
TV series - something that helps to escape in a better place and live a thousand different lives. If not reading a book than watching films and TV series.
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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any old port in a storm *sighs, Cat

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i am curious about a couple of things

"See, in the sky is flying crow" >> adding an "a" perhaps? [a flying crow]

"Caring salt through 'merica" >>did you mean Carrying?

"Love and hate and need of choice". >> [in need] instead of "and need"

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Thank you for corrections!

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