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Weeping Hope Springs

Waves of energy flow off your wings
seep into them weeping hope springs
cradled my head smoothing back hair
bring me to peace show me you care

Revealed in an atom of radiated joy
bathing in bliss , pain cannot enjoy
evermore near nor evermore farther
I wander this planet scared and scarred

My angel of mercy rapture pure heart
brought me in closer never to part
silky soft kisses that light up the dawn
makes a heart joyful never you mourn

Wiping off woe like a dirty child
simply get lost in your sweet smile
Laughing with joys echoed in night
I’m feeling peace from your indigo light

Energized might pours into me
sets a soul flying gracefully receded
soaked into nothing resurfaced in love
your wings did carry grace from above

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Thanks Kelsey ... Really glad you like it
I will have a look at your suggestions
I'm on my phone

Thank you for the read and comment

Love JC xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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A new companion for you to enjoy, and one to help with all that crap that is needed to be rid of.
Enjoy your bathe in the light of an eternal friend, just ask them, they always hear..
Lovely write they share your joy,
Yours as always Ian.T
PS:- The artful Dodger hasen't arrived yet waiting for an Elf to shout, La La

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

I am glad you liked this one its one of my old fav's when I dont have anything new to post I am going to post some of my old stuff thats in need of work

hope your well take care

love always JC xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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