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Wealth [Runic Symbol: Fehu]

w e a l t h is a lifetime of material and spiritual experience

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inspired by the Runic Symbol Fehu meaning wealth. Those interested in knowing about Runic Symbols may use the link https://www.instructables.com/id/How-To-Read-Runes/
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this one certainly has profundity in it; but I question if you need, in life.

w e a l t h is a lifetime of material and spiritual experience, this line on its own suggests that the 'wealth' is the spiritual and material experience accumulated in life.

(aside: in one of my poems the suppository for this wealth was the soul)

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The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight

thank you Tyro for reading and your good words....in fact I was also contemplating a lot if or not to add "in life" ...but since you also felt that it is unnecessary...i will remove it...
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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A thoughtful liner as usual. here raj, However, I agree with tyro about removing the "in life". I thought it is clear without it.
Well done friend.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

thanks dear friend Rula...i thought I had already deleted "in life"...done it now...
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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