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Submitted by lovedly on Thu, 2017-04-20 05:30

I am a creator of my own
version and vision
and unique creation
words unknown to modern generation
some may be my own creation
but natural

When I read Shakespeare
yearszzzzzzzz (no not snoring,) ago
I reproduced
''MACBETH''
to the very last word
in Cambridge exams
in two and a half hours
and
earned laurels ...

Thanks to the fairness of mind
of instructors then
who were a Gold mine
may be like heavenly divine.

Today's,
need to be more refined
so seeking Shakespeare.s
invisible blessings
many started calling me
the small miniature
Bonsai bard
ask any Neo
a fairly new brand

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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lovedly

Thu, 2017-04-20 12:46

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What I love about you
is your subtle sense of humour
and
that alone makes your life and poetry so beautiful .

Keep it up girl
or
must a grand pop
say lady

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Keith Logan

Tue, 2017-04-25 04:32

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I can't find myself commenting on a throw away snippet of eastern philosophy. I will therefor confine myself to something in your profile "If no one reads you just quit..." As my old school motto (Leith Academy) was the same as the port of Leith's, persevere, I tend not to agree. In fact I write for my own amusement and did so for many years before ever sharing any of my work.

Keith Logan
the happy chappy
https://www.neopoet.com/community-guidelines

lovedly

Tue, 2017-04-25 09:45

lovedly's picture

many times I was forced to quit
but since more than many read me
I stuck to my pit

Hence today six decades away
I spell poetry
rhyme or not forget it
many still read me

On another site
by the week end

4,00.000 reviews of my poetry
will see a

MARK!!!
Thanks for visiting my silly profile
I want all to make their own decisions
all their living while
in their own inimitable style....
regardless!!!!!

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