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We’re The men of many scars

We tried and died
To reach for
The stars.
But we’re
Barbarically
Blocked by prisons
bars.
so in a cell
We do dwell.
Been bludgeoned beaten bloodied
and gone through hell .
But even when
all our friends
Are gone.
Well still keep
Fighting for freedoms
Song .
We have to keep moving on.

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of rhyming!
1] prison's
2] bludgeoned, beaten and bloodied
3] We'll still keep...

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You said you are inspired by music and this sounds like a song, I really like this style and theme. Your rhyming is really cool.

Thank you...Teddy

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Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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