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WDYDTTM

Why do you do this to me
Come back into my life and tear me down
You're like a drug I can't get off of
Why do you do this to me
Come back and mess with my mind
Until I can't think straight
Why do you do this to me
Come back and make me feel special
I'm not special to you
So why do you do this to me
Because you want to play with me like I'm your little toy
Well I'm not your little toy anymore
When you come back I'll be there waiting to tear you down

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Free verse
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Comments

WHAT IS THIS TITLE i'M SURE THE LETTERS STAND FOR SOMETHING ONLY YOU KNOW ,SO HOW CAN YOU EXPECT OTHERS TO UNDERSTAND IT? also YOUR POEM IS MORE THAN A RANT THAN A POEM WHERE IS THE STRUCTURE? WHERE IS IT GOING?

Chrys

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