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Walking In Glory
With Jesus beside me
I'm walking in glory
With Jesus in me
I'm rejoicing to Jesus
Jesus is everything to me
He's awesome in glory
In mercy and majesty
He's Jesus, Lord over all
By: Leona Chaput
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jane210660
Sun, 2017-10-29 16:01
Laura
This is a poetry workshop site.
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I can’t see the value in the above poem by another poet.
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