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Walking
Stopped... kindly stunned, certain songs I not only enjoy their melody and message, more
occurs as my soul begins to hold hands with my heart, slowly walking me inside another's
talented work.
Asking myself... mere coincidence, or an uncommon connection brought by likemindedness…
easily expressed in their motivation to create, and my ability to receive something truly soothing
to me.
And just like my future significant other... relaxing with [ Mr. Creative me ]… strums your pain,
opening the pleasures of...……………………………..
" myself and their music." "c"
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
[This option has been removed]
Last few words:
happy reading
Editing stage:
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Comments
Geezer
Sun, 2020-03-29 17:16
Interesting thoughts...
I'm not so sure that it is an uncommon occurrence that writers of good music and well read books are different from us or anyone else. I believe that those that do so, are more in tune with what moves the rest of humanity. ~ Geezer.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
skon bon
Fri, 2020-04-10 16:52
responding to Geezer
Feeling you on that comment Geezer, hopefully that ball bounces my way. Appreciated very much so.
But one Question Geezer? Simply put, can I write and does my style distinguish me if nothing but slightly?
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