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Waiting
Waiting for you to come, but when?
How many more Summers, Autumns, Winters, and Springs,
do I have to bear them?
But I still will wait for you, even if it means forever.
Forever in my arms, life, and whole being,
that’s what it means, My Love.
Don't ever doubt that it won't come.
With both of us doing all we can, it's even within our reach
in our lifetime.
Waiting is not easy when both of us are miles away
But love conquers everything, reaches the unfathomable
depths of our hearts.
Waiting brings out the best in us, and it makes us the best of lovers
and friends, I’m here, you’re there,
but we move with One Heart and One Mind.
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c lynn brooks
Wed, 2022-07-27 20:31
I wonder
What will happen when you do meet at last will you meet each others expectations? Nice bit of writing
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williej
Sat, 2022-07-30 15:01
When we do finally meet, our
When we do finally meet, our each other's expectations are not that important; our strong love will surely overcome whatever challenges that may come our way. Chrys,thanks for your nice comment.-Willie
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