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Wait for me

Wait for me
around the edge of time
the edge of time
when I am called

Hold my hands in yours.
press them to show your love
come to my arms
just for a while,
as time slips by
below my feet
in a puff of smoke
I’m about to go
over the cliff
hold me tight
just once more,

for then who knows for sure
whether I shall be anymore
your love is all I sought
these years gone by
how time did fly
none can say
but
when it’s time to go
just be close,
for it’s the last loving way
for one to really say
Oh lovedly one do please
hold on
do stay

The time has not yet come to go away

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that there will be someone to hold your hand in those last moments. You have a grandiose personality that must still have some friends. Are there no family left? Remember, that if you have a good heart, [which you do], someone somewhere will remember you and that is the way we live forever. ~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

My siblings all have left me bereft
But thank you ///I have my own full family and two pets ///we call them TWINS ..dogs is not the word ///they are family.
This poem I composed in year 2012 ///many loved it
still many do
I was then very active and younger too
perhaps some one died ///a friend or relative
then I composed this poem.

SO many admire it ///now as you do.
At times you say such lovely things
tears of joy flow
my bestest pal
of neo
thanks GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

author comment

to value our friendship, that we have cultivated over the years. Stay well, friend. ~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

so nice of you to say so
Geez
stay well you too
You are a very good person
as was Sparrow ~~~Ian UK guy
to me

I want to publish a POEMS Book ---100 poems---
My best poems
Can you help with a good publisher
USA kind please

UK guy wants to make a song of
WAIT For Me
I don't know him

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I can't help you on either score. I don't know this 'Guy' from the UK and I have no idea of who are 'good' USA publishers. I have not published anything myself. I will ask around about the publisher and se what I can find
~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

U MAY ASK ELSE RELAX
THIS POEM IS DOING WELL FRIENDS SAY SO

author comment

Of poetry are only after one thing- your money- if you have a sentimental attachment to your work, publish it yourself. It will be a lot cheaper in the long run...of course, your work might be worth more because of your popularity, but just the same, cheaper to self publish.

Your piece is reflective of much of what you write, heartfelt and poignant.

Thomas

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...so like my lost dreams...the flood

we all are fishing all the time
for something something
I am an egoist
blasted narcissist
ask Gee
but I fish in the deep sea
burn my own fish bone
not much sentiments
very few reach the top of poetic pyramid
I know it

Thanks friend you r so very kind
guys like you wher can one find

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