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The Voices of Twilight

Delerious shadows
taunting my dreams,
can't hear myself
over the screams;

unassuming silhouettes
jangle my brain,
as the voices of Twilight
slowly drive me insane.

Constantly echoed
the screams seem all blurred,
'til a collective syllable
starts forming a word;

then fragments start clinging
to the threads of a thought,
like pearls to a strand
with all that they've got!

These demons of shadows
stay clean out of sight,
with only their voices
out riding winds in the night;

so, if you hear echoes
of giggles, and screams;
it's the other world's voices
travelling by, on a moonbeam.

So, lose not your braveheart
lose not, your nerve,
the shifting voices of Twilight
has thrown you a curve!

You're not in great danger
for, Twilight's passed by,
if you'd also grabbed a moonbeam
you'd have vanished, in the sky!

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Structured: Western
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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This is really piece of art.

Mona Rose

..your words are very kind. I really had a time with the ending, of this one.
love your opinion !

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