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Vincent's Opera

Submitted by Teddy15 on Mon, 2020-11-23 12:22

He was considered a weirdo
He had lots to say
Yet nobody really listened
A genius mind
He created landscapes
And starry skies
On his canvas
Sunflowers
From the finest meadows
I remember
His cry for help
A painting of himself
A bandage, his ears were no longer a pair.

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Calculus, was my first title, I don't know why. A change of title, now I can see! Vincent's opera
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Editing - rough draft
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Not Explicit Content

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Teddy15

Mon, 2020-11-23 13:18

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LoL it feels good to be mad, yes we are unlike Gogh's ears, a good pair.
The best medicine is always to laugh (wink) as for your painting maybe it did inspire!

Thank you...Teddy

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Teddy15

Tue, 2020-11-24 11:00

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Thanks for asking, today I had the stitches out and it looks new. Sorry you have an annoyance on your eye but for that there is cream, I'm sure. X

Thank you...Teddy

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Dandini

Tue, 2020-11-24 10:48

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I know and like the song too.

Teddy15

Tue, 2020-11-24 11:01

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How kind of you to come by

Thank you...Teddy

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