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Valentiny spirit

Now a day’s
It’s not guys who have to display,
roses for their Valentines …

I have observed many a gal
offer chocolates to a boy
for a soft kiss in return
so as to their inner desires burn.

So we must rename it now
call it a Ballsinday
as gals will come forward to play
they’ll ask of the guys
their love to display

from top to toe
as the world turns
sexually metro…

Hold the guys eye
some guys are more beautifuler than gals
so many a guy feels shy
when approached by a dozen,
being penniless

neither roses nor chocolates in return,
may be with kisses free
they will be a Valentine for thee

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This has been here in undiscovered place too long Feb 14 has long gone..
Your words were not up to your usual style and the twist in the subject dropped on poor soil.
This could have been good had you twisted it a lot more brought in some fun and made a skit of the subject.
Hope you are keeping well out there, now the Spring is here and the weather brings out the girls in their finery looking for what to do ????
Have a great time young Bard, Yours as always, Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

many times I mean
I wanted to see
will any one ever read this
Ian I always believe you
and will


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