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Submitted by emptiness on Fri, 2015-02-20 21:32

no lips can utter
no words by sound
convey beauty
when it exists unbound
on this planet
nor no other
not even a kiss
can impart enough
to a beauty such as this
when you're in love

Steven Zoric

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Sparrow

Sat, 2015-02-21 03:15

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You now have streamed three poems without a title, come on commit to your write and give the write a banner to fly.
Your words are fine and the themes are good so come on give them a name..
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Take care out there and come and have a bit of fun also, Yours Ian.T

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