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Unread Red Ones

No.1.
OK Stash It!

I like your secret
In how to double
Keeps em guessing?
Each one of them
And
Then keep answering
They will catch you
And
Take away all condoms
Hidden by uuuuuuuuuuuu

Stash them away
For another day
When we are two alone
And
Will only play
Then those condies
So stashed away
Will finally come
To help keep our secret
by the way
Till then
Keep them stashed
And
perhaps hashed
For better times to cum
When all are lined up with you
To have more loving fun

Have some spare
Lest many like it bare
And
You have to then share
AIDS
Freely,
So be aware.

No.2

Sex Attracts More Sex

Be it in dreams
Or imagination
And
Guy Logan

Has it all in him
Try him
Try him
Try him
In his imagination
And
Mine in friction!

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Comments

the excitement in line 2 made me read the rest in rush but the body supported it.
i would remove the 'No.' lines, they don't seem to fit in with the mood.
keep 'em coming.

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