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UNREAD OH! IT'S OKAY

Such a beautiful
lovely composed poem
by Neo's
poet organiser
so far unread

it makes my heart bleed
no one so far has read me
this week
wtf
what should I weep

founders are in no different position as me
why do I sulk and weep
none read me

Neo's have their own cotorie
I am part of none

but some do walk
as the autumn dawn
Stan was once
the present CEO
I had recommended
has totally forgotten me
WHO
Loverme ?

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

You are not forgotten.
We all do the best that we can do.
Peace and Merry Christmas with happy holidays,

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.
That's how I see it,

Mark L.

MERRY XMAS to you and your dear inner family and friends too MERRY XMAS

author comment

Feeling you, as myself, as we all do at times. The stars my friend. Sometimes the tide is out
What is a poet anyway but an aching heart reaching through the tides Very much a 12th house activity poetry is, for most of us anyway, 83% of Americans don't even have a 7th grade vocabulary What a state of dilapidation I feel the way you do often I tell myself keep writing …….WTF :)

HI BUT I don't belong to the 12th house
of isolation limitation and grief
I don't believe in stars
they are only LANDMARKS HEAVENLY

I am a real smiley
YES WTF
keep composing
some will only missing good things
keep rolling zebra

author comment

Don't know how to spell it but it sounds like "two shay"
Have a great time out there you can always read some of mine if you become bored xx

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