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Universal Sex Inspired By Barbara

'' I gave you my heart, you threw me a bone
A bare bone, lacking flavor’’’ Poet Barbara …

Yeah ,Yeah ,Yeah
Just excellent ,
it inspires and fires.

The human race,
Is normally compared to
Dogs and rats…
Behaviorally ,
these two kinds abound.

There is no life,
Which is not surrounded by sex…
Artists, including painters and poets,
Cum off their very best,
When in their bare

Hope you have seen
The Titanic explore,
The manifestations
of human minds galore

Tis sex which cements
The physical bodies,
At least two,
Souls I know not of

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Talk about an edgy piece. Good form and flow to it also. istan

W. H. Snow

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I like ur wow sir

ex ISTAN

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none else found it so

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Sex is life, and without life we would not be here whether we be a Dog or Rat. As i don't believe in god i will let others define what sex is compared to souls. I have a choice and i know what believe to be better, keep the souls. Nice piece. Regards Roscoe...

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

You alone speak my mind

I have gone hoarse
yelling that sex is life
AND
my master did say ,
ere his last moment
of dying day..

Hello friend ,
remember this...

LOVELIES BETWEEN THE THIGHS
Then he laid still...

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All life stems from the desire to create, recreate and procreate, yet poets lie side by side
in sardine cans.

;-)

~A

I'm putting that one on my wall. wesley

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heY
EX...ISTAN

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POETS also rot as

they refuse to change their stance ...more SHAKESPEARES are needed... if poets need to flourish... remove the don't do this,,, don't do that tag ... no blog poems.. no comments converted to poetry
ARE ALL INDICATORS OF IDIOSYNCRATIC ..CRADLED AND SADDLED AS WELL AS SADDENED MINDS ALBEIT
I am sorry to say so
A poet in order to survive should be like a vast desErt
a vast ocean spread across eternity... if you want poetry to survive .. TODAY'S LIMITED WORLD

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this one before
and your question to me
now confronts me
which poetry did i compose
after being inspired by yours...
i shall have to axe my mind
to dig it out perhaps I may.

UNIVERSAL SEX INSPIRED BY BARBARA

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To inspire another in positiveness is grand. Was feeling down. You perk up my day easing the pain I endure gracefully.
I read your poem, i think its a great write, flowed perfectly. Universal Sex; life an sex go hand in hand. "No sex no life. No life no need for sex". Thanks for directing me here.

My present situation is one where I haven't the resources to be on here as much lately. Here now, so I'm putting in my best while I can.
Glad to be here.

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If at first you lose your way, never give up, you'll find your place

We all
each one of us
some terrible things do experience
but to my mind
I always have one saying
that is
''''if you are wrong apologize,
but
if you are right
stand up and fight
with all your might

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If I'm wrong I do apologize. The hard part is getting me to see I'm wrong when I'm convinced in my self-righteousness that I'm right lol. Otherwise as your saying goes I aggressively stand up and fight with all my might, to my detriment at times. Since hitting age 50' I let it be and accept that another is right and I'm the one often wrong lol, if I'm proven right I say told you so with a stare.lol

You are wonderful person

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Born in the year of the TIGER
CHINESE
AND
such folks are strong, ferocious and no one dare say they r wrong ......HAHAHAHAHHA

and
if you are a LIBRA on top of it
things may be not as good
So hold on to your horses,
life's made up of roses and thorns
don’t attempt to pull a rose
without scrape of a thorn …
I speak in riddles
as others see
but if you want a private conference
do message me …
hopefully
And thanks for addressing me
as a wonder
After all that I am

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i do tend to get lost in your riddles lol
Like deer in headlights

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bye

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by Barbara selected 6/51

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still to this day

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I have finally selected it

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what did i say. if it was a problem i wasnt aware of it

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all quiet on the poetic front

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