As Jess would say, There are times when you write an excellent piece and this is one of them, it was well worth reading..
One line is a puzzle:- "but till then shall have to hold it"
Who I ask doth hold it twas left in the ether of eternity where one day it will rain as you will ask it to..
Grand write I am not posting at the moment, until the workshop closes, as there are few that read and comment .
Take care young Bard, Yours Ian.T

yet I hear your anguish.

You mentioned God, I forgot about Jesses aversion to the subject so I shall just say as an abstract piece this one was OK.
Though as a vague Spiritualist I would only say the poem was OK and not in my belief filing cabinet, that my belief is vague is down to people trying to twist most religious beliefs for their own gains.
It would not matter what happens here on Earth, people can queue up for any belief, god or whatever in this day and age it would end up on twitter or facebook and be laughable.
As laws these varied religions use to keep the multitudes of people in some block of order, nowadays it doesn't work.
I wonder what the future will bring, my Crystal ball is clouded at the moment but who cares, at my age the sun came up this morning as it usually does and has for all my life, it is Sunday which is good we don't have damn parents dropping their kids off outside for school as they make so much noise.
Go well with all you believe young Bard and keep writing.
Yours Ian.T