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Two Hearts Meet

Words were breathed over the unhatched egg
The destined rider was chosen
To bear the heart of a dragon
Their jewel-like hearts of hearts
Fearlessness, tenacity and valour
The rider exuberates!

She rode along the Dragon’s back
And share the heart of the dragon
She carried the hearts of fire
And held on to the breathing earth
She became invincible
With bold courage and a brave heart
She fought her battles adventurously!

The blue dragon flapped its wings
And took her high oft into the sky
She became him and he became her
Their souls entwined as one
They flew among the clouds and hid in the water
They both loved each other
As they journeyed together

The dragon looked to her for guidance
To be kept safe among the earth
With shiny clear scales and large golden eyes
The dragon breathe fire as he matured across the land
He spoke the words to the female rider
Ride on ride on victory is ours!

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