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Twisted Man Anyone
Men are not very intelligent
silently they continue bowing
get for whatever little they are vying
ladies know best way to maintain
solace harmony
let him within self retain
always was once a man
smiled my house earlier
little doubt
on the road
nearing breath taking divorce
like a lame broken-
three legged horse
is me manly enough
sans all my age
she mow places me in her cage
little warmth smouldering rage
lowly just mocking
simply lagging
undoubtedly earlier having enjoyed
her permission
sprawled like a once sexy lion
smirks openly behind
my back
(all know)
once married what happened
@seventy five years experience
still desires or expects
Blue Diamond
like charcoal
burned almond
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Sun, 2020-08-02 18:01
Getting the feeling...
but not the whole experience. Then again, maybe I don't need to. i like believing that I'm the lion of the house. LoL ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Sun, 2020-08-02 21:57
i like believing that I'm the lion of the house.
Then keep and or stay
have your imitable way
I say
LoL ~ Geez.
lovedly
Thu, 2020-08-13 14:40
r u a lion
tiger or tigress
which man or woman like man
ru
lol stan