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TWIN NIAGARAS YOURS AND MINE

Niagara Falls

I only wish you had been to Niagara
romance never ends there ever,
I would love to have one each day
come what may winter spring or snow
always makes sweet love grow

upon my life’s arc
there is a permanent glow
how I wish all of you
sooner than later to Niagara go
make the most beautiful
of all God's presentations of love
naturally within you flow

now stop short
you hearts palpitate
take a car
a flight right away
stay at any lovely
Niagara fall's over looking place
do stay
your romance will bloom
that’s what one can surely say.

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Thanks Gee find a job for me......And stan for your help thanks
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Not Explicit Content

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to Niagra Falls once, many years ago, but I've never forgotten the power that you feel from the thunderous roar of all that water. If anyone goes, they should definitely take the trip on the Maid of the Mist. It truly is a life changing experience! I can see why people write about it. Nice job Lovedly, you should get a job writing publicity about Niagra Falls! ~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

Be happy GEE

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Nice job Lovedly, you should get a job writing publicity about Niagara Falls! ~ Geez.
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Last line first stanza is a bit Yoda sounding. Maybe "Always makes sweet love grow"? Perhaps one day I'll get a chance to go to the falls...........

thanks done

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