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TULIPS - MY VALENTINE POEM

Tulips – two lips -
Not too far apart,
Make a magical lure
For one lonely heart
But better by far
Than two lips apart
Would be four lips
Pressed close to
Two beating hearts.

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Comments

the whole day I spend in Victoria Gardens
where tulips only invite in varying positions

a good HAPPY VALENTINE DAY poem
Congrats you found one
a pair at least one

for a lonely heart. The pursing, pouting of twolips so close together surely will bring all four to the fore.
Happy Valentine's Day. ~ Geez.
.

It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

Thank you for your comments - unfortunately the tulips didn't do it this time.

author comment

Thanks Mark.

Will

author comment

or missed me
Tulips here are lovely
like WORDSWORTH'S
Daffodils

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