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tsunami, SUNKU -IRIZ WORK SHOP!

Submitted by lovedly on Sun, 2018-02-25 07:23

tsunami,
really does
come infrequent

pierce
eyes and see
remnants galore

await
another may
come ashore

(of syllables I ain't too sure
do assure)

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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IRiz

Sun, 2018-02-25 10:03

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Tsunami
Is not funny
It is a serious truble
Be ready
To dig out
All your poetic strength
Discard all the rubble
Come out fresh
And write something tiny

Lol

IRiz

lovedly

Sun, 2018-02-25 13:02

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rflol

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