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TRUE POEM The Appointment

''As my time is nearing
the coast of time
soon I may also be
non -existent.''

A very young girl
we knew
just went into the operation room

‘'meet you on the other side.''

we all stand by the banks of a river
when the stream will engulf us
no one knows ever

we just look blank
into wilderness
who is calling us

she came int my dreams

‘‘Friend come over
its fun and frolic here
Oh you need not fear''

impressed by her great
intense message
she spoke to me
before she really departed

I felt a surge
like she was calling me
she was too young
much younger than most

but the unknown force
can call any one
any time
just anyone
no fuss

worry not our fraternity
time is always a mystery
those who come must go
but when
Even heavens do not know.

That is the best part of the living show

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..disturbingly parallel with something I had written for a lost one. I find your work extremely creative and inspiring. Be well, lovedly and know that your art is only fleeting to people who lack vision.
And keep writing!


. like my lost dreams...the flood

reading you there is no risk I am original creativity energy now many know it you too

Let all fly if they wish to

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Dear lovedly, your poem is also emotionally disturbing to me. I've lost two young sons, as you most likely remember, at a very young age. Keep writing and touching other poets' hearts.

"My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies; fairy tales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly, my friends.” – Freddie Mercury

do you recall you had given this title thanks ma'am many have liked it truth pierces the inner hearts of those emotional

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