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True Art

true art
true art
fantasy
true art
true art
make believe

breathe in breathe out a melody
shape dreams through her hair calamity
a vortex of the eye
dim switch
dim switch
new age itch

kicking up pricks
care on with a song
carry on in a dream
time zone
time zone
heads alone
fantasy

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Comments

the rhythm of this, it seems to be heading somewhere, I just can't discern where. BTW, it is breathe, with an [e] on the end. ~ Geezer.
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