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trinity of love

OUR VALENTINES
The love of a valentine
I shall say nothing in between
they are in love really
hearts within hearts
Kisses only
Valentines come and play
very few only love
do love display
so do they

METAPHORICALLY SPEAKING THIS
Learning banana skills

Because a sitting duck gets killed
and a flying eagle
soars above the hill
so keep moving here and there
you will then be spared
none will be able to peel
you...still be not evil
they will kill

HEALING LIFE'S MISADVENTURES

Healing you
Nice...
Though darkness prevails
even doc’s stitches dissolve
yours are superficial
do them in the background
of your mind resolve
your problems will be solved
read more of me
and see
how stitches of distraught humans, I seal
like a banana men and women, love to peel...
and you will be
instantly seemingly healed

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Comments

I especially liked the title Lovedly...

Regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

contents were reverberations
and reflections
on poets read
thanks for passing by
raj

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