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TRINITY

Submitted by Geremia on Mon, 2016-08-15 13:06

TRINITY

TRINITY

Into waters pure and clean
sunlit prism blue and aquamarine
fall three pearls iridescent white
with no mark or stain and into ripples
softly fade

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

Vivovon

Mon, 2016-08-15 15:39

No matter what "Trinity" may be in reality, your words depict a serene and tranquil nature. I like it.

xxxxx

lovedly

Mon, 2016-08-15 16:03

lovedly's picture

Earth ...Universe and Eternity

also
Leo Aries and Saggy
these three are
Fire eternity.....

LIKE
Libra Gemini and Aquarius
are air kinds

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