rhyme scheme almost spot on with an in-form sestet - cdecde –
however I think you need to look at the rhyme of the seventh line - ‘roads’ – to my ear not close enough to even be called approximate…. at least not for a sonnet
suggestion - ‘and rot then cause our suns and moons lose flow’

great volta xxx

one small thing about sonnet writing
it is an idea, when looking up the different styles, to ascertain for what reason the poets specifically developed the particular form

- this is what I have in my little sonnet memo book – sorry I can’t cite the reference as I never kept it
‘the Petrarchan Sonnet is a verse form that typically refers to a concept of unattainable love. It was first developed by the Italian humanist and writer, Francesco Petrarca. Conventionally Petrarchan sonnets depict the addressed lady in hyperbolic terms and present her as a model of perfection and inspiration'

I really like the choice of theme you have used. I don’t know if you meant to or not, but this can be read superficially as a genuine belief, then if one considers the form, it emerges as quite a cynical write

well done rula
love judy
xxxx

oops
trying to rhyme the wrong sound

of course it is abba – I just got confused as ‘roads’ more rhymes with ‘glow’ than ‘mold’

so my adjusted suggestion :)
‘and rot then set our suns and moons less bold’
xxxx

It has become apparent to me that sonnets are far from my strong point lol. The imagery here is strong and the rhyme pattern a difficult one to maintain but you did well in doing so. I Do wonder why you wrote the whole thing in double spaced lines instead of quatrains with ending rhyming couplet. Perhaps it's a requirement for this particular type sonnet? I also enjoyed the sense of longing you imparted..................stan