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Touching the moon's

Touching the other side
of the silent
flat chested moon.

I thought the moon was a flat mirror
till the Digest struck me dumb

Naive okay straightforward idiot
the moon runs faster than does the sun
shows the front face only to human

now tis your reflection
go get the other half across the moon
if you can run faster too
can you
F uuuuuuu

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Free verse
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but do i detect a hint of sensuality? it feels like this poem is about discovery. a sudden realization, maybe. nice write.


when a poetry/poem has
many dimensions to it
so many view it so differently
then alone tis poetry!

The moon has its parallel
on the earth in a woman
who has more than one side

Now its for you to say
which one .

well you have lent a mind
to Neopoets to define
to the views herein refine

Your mind is divine
that's why they chose you to
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