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Tossing thoughts in the wind

Dancing shadows of leaves
Tell me it’s Autumn

Colorful shades, turning from bright green
to yellows and pinks, pumpkin orange
then to soft browns

Sunshine beaming
through the skeleton of the great Oak

All the while I’m wondering
how could the transition
from this now, sleeping Summer
be so glorious?

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I pictured every word a beautiful work of imagery
hand is healing nicely although it is ever color of the rainbow stitches come out Tuesday
this poem was a joy to read it had such a soothing sense about it

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So good to see you, I am so thrilled you have enjoyed this poem, autumn is my favourite season. So glad your healing, soon you'll be better than ever. Big hugs

Thank you...Teddy

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I could just shoot myself for having overlooked your descriptive autumn poem, but
then I would first have to run to Guns Plus for cleaning patches and tell Mac what I needed them for . . . so, all in all I should just tell you how much I love your poem:
A WHOLE DARN LOT. YES, LET SUMMER FADE AWAY! WELCOME FALL.
Note: here in my valley the temp registered 104 degrees F at 4 PM.
Very nice write, Signora. Jerry

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Why thank you sir, yesterday was 20 felt very cold, we didn't pass 40 this year thank goodness, we may even get some snow. Thank you for your lovely review. Hugs.

Thank you...Teddy

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fortunate enough to live in the temperate zone, where I get the benefit of four seasons. I am particularly fond of summer, but enjoy them all. I am retired and so don't have to work in the weather and avoid sweating, freezing and most of the other things associated with working outdoors, and I can go inside and look out the window if need be. LoL
I love the fall colors and the celebration of Halloween and Thanksgiving. One thing I don't understand, is the fascination with that damned pumpkin-spice coffee, I love pumpkin pie but not in my coffee! I love your last lines in the " the transition from this now sleeping summer". It does, indeed seem to me, that Autumn is Summer sleeping. very descriptive and thoughtful. ~ Geez.
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Thank you, it's my favourite season because Christmas comes soon. Love the autumn and winter, it's hard for those who work outside that's for sure.
We also have four seasons although sometimes it doesn't feel so, two weeks ago it was 35 and now sits 17. Hugs to you my friend

Thank you...Teddy

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difficult for me to translate centigrade to fahrenheit, but am going to put a conversion thingy in my favorites so that I can do it without having to resort to figuring it out myself. LoL ~ Geez.
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oh yes sorry 20,c 68 f or 40c 120 plus f

Thank you...Teddy

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104 degrees F is 40 degrees C. Always glad to be of help. Lol.
Jerry

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