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Titles........LET'S WAIT..My latest poem

''Awesome poetic blend
of the poet''s expression
flowing like a river
that ultimately unites
in the sea.
Skunk, flunk and hunk
made it even more daring.
Awesome beautifully written.

Admirations and appreciations Sir.''

ADD ON
''The flames of anguish
Burns that was exquisite
Leaving ashes that serve manure
Holy is the soul
Who refrain it whole.
What victory it is
Saying
I''m best
You are less......

(PLEASE TITLE IT)

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Why of course

"Unique"

One word !

Lovedly I see maybe here you wanted to point out that one poem is no better or worst than another if I'm correct. Dipending on taste of course as we all have different types we love. That's why I thought of unique because I feel that is what I was getting from this work.

Thank you...Teddy

So it's UNIQUE
WOW WHAT A GREAT SENSE
OF CONVEYANCE

author comment

Hello lovedly, intriguing poem, not sure that I understand all. Terry has given you a fine title and understands far more that I do, at first read. Small nit below:

"made it even more dared." I suppose you mean "daring"?
Thank you, Gracy

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Know then thyself, presume not God to scan,
The proper study of Mankind is Man.
Plac’d on this isthmus of a middle state,
A being darkly wise, and rudely great….

An Essay On Man, III, Alexander Pope.

More Than The Rest! ~ Geezer.
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Honest critique and comments shouldn't hurt.
It's why we are here, to get better at our craft.

What should be the title
of this comment of a poem
Thanks

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