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tis metaphorical poetry

Submitted by loved on Sat, 2014-02-01 15:55

Each one of us is an identity
what a pity
we all are so different
and
have a different poetic inference

what of metaphorical notion
poetry is partly autobiographical

and

mostly inspirational
metaphors are known but rarely used
most poetry is generally implied
we thank each other
for being poetic guides
as all enjoy the mental
plateau- tudunal rides

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Ian.T

Mon, 2014-02-03 18:38

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My heart was broken
As the light of my life
Was drowning in a sea of grief
A bubbly personality
Full of fire
Time was the thief here

The apple of my eye
Had a stench of failure
As she faded off to sleep
I was feeling so blue
A rollercoaster of emotion
Reeking of infidelity
I was so glad it was raining women
No good you fishing

I am not going to tell you anymore
Yours Sparrow ( ROTFLMAO )

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

loved

Mon, 2014-02-03 19:34

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did you mean

Reeking

or wreak
which either would do
but your preference is ???

loved

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Ian.T

Tue, 2014-02-04 03:51

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As the piece I wrote was all meta what's its "The Reek" is to smell of infidelity, which I suppose means that it can be wrong, in that if you had a very close encounter you may smell of it lol.
Just up your street that explaination young Loved,
I think to Reek or not to Wreak that is the question,
Be it better to Smell than cause Havoc..
Have a lovely day out there where ever you are????
Yours as always Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

loved

Tue, 2014-02-04 11:20

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The Reek" is to smell of infidelity,???????
which I suppose means
that it can be wrong,

loved

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