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A tiny text of lovely consequence

What a whimsical world in which we both are gifted a chance to reside.
I liquidly love the feeling of your body on mine more than I can describe or quickly and nimbly imbibe.
Yet despite my mellow pacing allow my tongue curled and tied to attempt a linguistic reeling of haughty design and frisky rhythms inside your thighs.
As we gaze into painted and soft moving whispy skies with bellowed brains and deepening lung brachia sighs. Keep my face and creed so we may shine no matter how high our rays may conjure from the spot where dreaming is born and judgment dies.

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except the use of the clinical word brachia detracts, in my opinion.

cheers,
Jess
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