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times toll

even sleep has an element of time,
for you just awake
after a short and sweet
slumber
and
then you enter
into a no -time zone
if you don't rise again...

till then sleep
and
un-sleep
as usual,
till dreams do over take,
as you enter the timelessness zone
and
about that there is
absolutely,
no mistake.

till then sleep
and
if you desire awake
when the
spirit! is ready
it will come
and
it shall you finally
on its wings take...

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Comments

I used to hate sleep... I saw it as mini deaths. Time has changed me and my views. Sleep is a necessary evil for it recharges us.

love, Cat

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its a must
else we will rust
and u haven;t yet read my
IFAN .... Cat

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