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time's mirror

Submitted by lovedly on Tue, 2016-08-30 18:45

There is a time for every thing
Youth for experimenting
Teens for sexing
Mid age for marriage
Old age for carriage
of those who still seem to be
a burden
but cannot be abandoned

Then you take their place
others come to see you face
and
call you all mirrors of time
times you once did trace
they will now pace

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

Vivovon

Tue, 2016-08-30 22:20

Nice to read, good to read or lovely to read? Maybe all, especially for an old timer who is patiently waiting to see his parents and kin in the other dimension. At all times, there is beauty, which is lovely. This is what your poem says, as per my perception. Hope I am right.

xxxxx

lovedly

Wed, 2016-08-31 00:10

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you is is as per you

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lovedly

Wed, 2016-08-31 13:56

lovedly's picture

Keep smiling

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