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Time's exodus

What a pleasure ‘twill be
If you give some time to me
as you have so rightly said
there is a time to come
a time to go
a time to request
a time not to
a time to invite
a time to forget
whatever you may
don't ever time regret
for there is no time
for me nor you
if a hurricane decides
to come through
but this is the right time
for me to say
what a timely
nice, beautiful poet
time brings to us
there is no time left now to fuss
the time has come tonight for us.
Where is the time you can promise me
that the time will ever come again
for you and I
O your poetry is so timely
let all time us set free

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nice poem but the theme is not very clear, natural disaster or time.

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