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TImeless sound

Submitted by TruTh sE3ka on Thu, 2011-01-20 03:51

Rhythm beat melody passion the heart the soul
A being given into a sound that echoes from the heart
Songs that have no beginning but will never end.
A tideless flow that will never cease to end.
I bury my being in a single song
eyes closed falling deeper and deeper
the words surging over me caressing my heart
Peace washing away all other thought
Nothing but notes cords melodies rushing through my head
my being encased lost in songs that speak of things lost
Songs now forgotten
But still the music lives through my soul
Timeless

Style / type: 
Free verse
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TruTh sE3ka

Mon, 2011-01-24 10:35

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I really appreciate the feed back

Still trying to figure how to break away from the path that im currently on which is the IT field and how to make a go of being a writer

Unfortunatly living in south africa doesnt leave me with many international oppertunities

TruTh_sE3ka

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Sparrow

Wed, 2015-06-17 11:09

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I hope you still read Neopoet's pages, I spent near 12 years in South Africa and here I am in the UK retired but with memories of your country that would fill a book or two..
You seem to think that being so far away your work is lost may I suggest that you join in the workshops or just join us again,
Yours Ian.T (Sparrow)

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