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time travel eh!

They, meaning
WE humans, collectively
Finally reached the comet
a decade of flying in space
what precision mind can trace
okay lace

do let me know
which GOD!
helped them
in this race

If silence is gold
then GOD
too has become old

move along with times
if one still may

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Earth should have a flag....but we have countries
instead...Maybe a corporate samples..
it is marvelous to think of what we can do with
all the time to tinker....along with all the calamity
we do here to earth...

I must say Loved that you take on the issue
with gusto though!

Never obscure even in your obscurites...

Thank You!

Esker Sir,
we had met earlier

author comment

A fun write, no need to bring God into it, as the little miracle that settled on the comet so God , both are man made to keep us all in line as my acrostic will say:-
What with computers now and the ability of man that uses them we will soon be out there looking back thinking why did we wander so..
Yours, Ian

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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