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Time Isn't High

O but don't yet sigh
no need to say goodbye
The time is yet not nigh
says the doc
so why say goodbye
let him you not deny
make you prematurely sigh
when the time is yet not nigh
'tis not yet time to die

of Corona be not shy
of it you shan't ever die
so why with the Virus vie

but take care of red laces
as you show of old traces
hanging around your inner places
try not to come and on a platform lie

the doc will do nothing then
but let you silently die

Of Corona don't ever be shy
your time is yet nigh

so no need to say
a final goodbye

your time is not yet nigh

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Just a fleeting thought will I ever be by CORONA COVID19 ever caught
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Not Explicit Content

Comments

Well as you write with your very own style that is quite remarkable. Sometimes I've been convinced you may be a scientist, maybe it's the way your logic works. In any case it's a comlimemt, in Europe arrives the second wave Inn the UK it's bad today. I. Sorry for my friends and family. They should have just told everyone this year to stay close and spend their money close to home, instead of spreading again this unwanted bug. I think at Xmas we will be in our second lockdown here in italy, so remind me I said this. It's a dark dark year. I hope I'm wrong. Good night fellow poet.

Ps your first stanza stands as a poem by itself. Good work.

You could call this poem "just a fleeting thought" but that's just my thought

Thank you...Teddy

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author comment

what does gn mean?

Thank you...Teddy

gn=====GOODNIGHT

author comment

Oh I see, (giggle) I was wondering all day!

Thank you...Teddy

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