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TIME EMERGES FROM MY ARCHIVES
Value Time
Time is that something
man has created
by inventing a clock
to track the motion
of the sun
but all of us
fall short of it mostly
we all simply
whine, go here and there
to dance and dine
then we define
time yours you spent
money mine
now for your smaller pleasures
I have none
I am leaving
for you I have
just no more of my
invaluable time
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
So many poems discovered today virgins still
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Jackweb
Tue, 2022-06-28 00:40
Yes ..
for sure, time is truly what we fall short of! Despite that man invented it as a clock for creating time of his own yet we don't purposely maintain it to a standard.
So, we should manage our time effectively and create a life time schedule.
"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
scribbler
Tue, 2022-06-28 01:30
Reminds me of a quote from.....I think Thomas Jefferson :
If you value life waste not time for time is the stuff life is made of. Good one loved
lovedly
Tue, 2022-06-28 11:51
wise ones like u and jeffy
and above ones need to be thanked SO ONCE AGAIN SCRIBBLE my tnx o dear STAN LOL
lovedly
Tue, 2022-06-28 19:53
any more for any more
do say for sure
my archives are bulging
saying posts all will endure
Candlewitch
Wed, 2022-06-29 09:29
dearest lovedly...
Time is something that eludes me, I'm always losing track of it! I really liked these lines:
Value Time
Time is that something
man has created
by inventing a clock
to track the motion
of the sun
and
now for your smaller pleasures
I have none
I am leaving
for you I have
just no more of my
invaluable time
my dearest lovedly, you have developed into a philosopher!
* hugs, Cat
*
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lovedly
Wed, 2022-06-29 12:47
you have developed into a philosopher!
Thanks Cats I always was
lol
Candlewitch
Wed, 2022-06-29 13:23
you are right...
so you have honed your craft!
*hugs, Cat
*
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And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.