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TIME EMERGES FROM MY ARCHIVES

Value Time
Time is that something
man has created
by inventing a clock
to track the motion
of the sun

but all of us
fall short of it mostly
we all simply
whine, go here and there
to dance and dine
then we define
time yours you spent
money mine

now for your smaller pleasures
I have none
I am leaving
for you I have
just no more of my
invaluable time

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
So many poems discovered today virgins still
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

for sure, time is truly what we fall short of! Despite that man invented it as a clock for creating time of his own yet we don't purposely maintain it to a standard.

So, we should manage our time effectively and create a life time schedule.

"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".

~Jackweb

If you value life waste not time for time is the stuff life is made of. Good one loved

and above ones need to be thanked SO ONCE AGAIN SCRIBBLE my tnx o dear STAN LOL

author comment

do say for sure
my archives are bulging
saying posts all will endure

author comment

Time is something that eludes me, I'm always losing track of it! I really liked these lines:

Value Time
Time is that something
man has created
by inventing a clock
to track the motion
of the sun

and

now for your smaller pleasures
I have none
I am leaving
for you I have
just no more of my
invaluable time

my dearest lovedly, you have developed into a philosopher!

* hugs, Cat

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Thanks Cats I always was
lol

author comment

so you have honed your craft!

*hugs, Cat

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When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

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