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till one can.....hold on as long.

hold on as long.

I assure you there is nothing beyond
we all love those who to us here belong

then all go up to
the pyre cemetery incinerator
and say
SO LONG ......

well since he is gone
why even go to the
Rideliew
'tis so far
most say so
no one will know
fare well for long

so on the Earth
only stay
here alone we all belong
come along
we all will sing a merry song
hahahahha....peeee pong
to worldly happiness we all
belong
so keep the fight on
we and all Neo
will stay
till one is finally gone
So stay on!

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Free verse
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Comments

well done...poignant

joe

you still have a long time to go
you are still young
and
your poetry has now sprung

see you typed it
once again
without help from
Richards

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