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To hold her for so long
as the sun promises
not to set but to her belong

He wants her
to remain within him
as long as the night
an eternal life

they both want
to weave into each
without the distance
of sun and moon
they both want to entwine
like summer vine
ere sets in the autumn of life

soon the weather will change
they still within each others arms
want to for ever remain
permanently like natural glue

simply one out of the blue
these love birds two
follow them will you

love abounds
in pure hearts only
heart beats simply slowly
till the rush of tsunami
makes them shatter
the walls of existence may be
they alone will for each other
for ever be

follow them too will ye
like pigeons two
you could be

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Wow, this is just wonderful. Your first 3 stanza's make a poem too. Love the ending beautifully crafted, I would think more about a title change, as I wasn't really expecting the content to be so tender.
Maybe just

Throes of Love?

Thank you...Teddy


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