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think not of me

the hard hits of life
seem so true,
when some one
who is in love with you
only then you do..
how love does ensue
along with you
in reverie we all dwell,
like summers gone blue
in memory we sway
either way...
when love sings songs
of life and dismay,

then we seek the far distance
our eyes closing bleak
Oh horizon
where are you going,
leaving me

let’s bask in the glories of today,
yesterday has gone asleep
tomorrow may or may not be
a love story twill be
between you and me.

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A love that is a true love will hold you for ever,
No space no time, just a now that lasts.
A calm that pervades the Spirit for your own eternity
Dreams that last after sunrise, always without fading
Then you have something to hold, that is beyond words.
Go well young Bard, and live in the now,
that is modified by all your yesterdays,
Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

summaeized Ian


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