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Think of Me

Imagine in the wilderness of times evolution
one day you would not find me
what will you think
lost am I also
in the open wild
forests
jungles
and
gardens
no where to be found
just feel the cool breeze
did in it I freeze
or
was solidified in the layers of snow
Just think of me
as a last image that was I
in your mind
then recall
what could have happened
in our combined wilderness

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Free verse
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out of the snow! You are making me cold! Where are you? How come you have wandered off in the middle of the night, like a elderly amnesiac? LoL. You have a plaintive quality here, something that makes the reader want to come looking for you. ~ Gee.
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cold is still severe

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in the warmth of friendship and congeniality. ~ Gee.
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next is Eumol
but he seems also to be feeling cold
where is he

have you not read Shakespeare posted by me
455 years NOW OLD

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