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They Glow Then Just Flow

I have been on line
all over
despite all danger

and

I have seen
many spar for a few weeks
then they have no time
for neither you Neo or Me
and flee

They take away
all Neopoet's cake
then they say
Lee you
who

Is one such a one
you

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
MODERN POETS OF THEY SAY OF REPUTE
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

too vague for me to decipher. ~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

if you are saying that there are new members who only post poems for the attention it gets them, then they run off without bothering to read other poets work or offer comment. then I really agree with you, it makes me mad and sad!

*hugs, Cat

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When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

wonder why Gee didn't like it never mind he is Chair
has to be fair
I have been in NEO for over 14 years loved and lovedly combined
Thanks Cats for ur support
THE WHOLE TRUTH BE TOLD

author comment

I think he might understand the poem if he read it again, looking through new eyes!

*hugs, Cat

When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

After her explanation, I understood it better. I agree with both of you. It's a shame, but it will happen, nothing we can do about it. Let's just continue to be welcoming and hope that people stick around long enough to get to know us. ~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

FINE THANKS WE ALL UNDERSTAND
IF SOME ONE DOES NOT COMMENT ON URS
DON'T COMMENT ON THEIRS I SUPPOSE
LOL THO

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