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There is no lack in you

There is no lack in you

And you have discovered
And
Continue to uncover,
Imagery and metaphor
That only you uniquely
Can share with the world

If however you choose
To silence your pen,
Then the world would be at a loss....

There are among us,
Many scientists,
Who have expressed themselves in verse?
Wonderful poetry and fiction...
It is a known territory
And a very open road

The key to poetry,
Is the music and dance?
That the writer partakes,
While articulating what
Their Muse has stirred within.

Having said thus,
We should never allow ourselves,
To compare
And envy one another,
For we are all unique
And have individual voice
To speak
And
Springs out of which to draw from

Our sole duty is to be faithful
To our voice,
Our source and our muse

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I specifically marked this entry as "rough draft" and any suggestion, any idea is welcomed wholeheartedly. Please go to town on this one. Part of the reason why will be revealed in my reply to scribbler's comment. Cheers, Freds.

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I can guess who this is directed at and expect recipient will be pleased................scribbler

Hey scribbler,
this was a comment to a comment/poem that waxed rather poetic. So it's up as a rough draft of sorts and may yet transform. I suppose your guess would be correct. Thanks for your kind words of comment. CB

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Content is spot on here, feeling is in it and so true to life it bounces off this page into my lap. I really love what you have written here Cryptic. Many blessings to you poet.

Love,Magics

Your kind word of comment are much appreciated. CB

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'Break, break break on thy cold grey stones, O Sea.'

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